Does my writing sound good?

A couple of problems here. You are trying toooo hard to make erudite statments, and it actually detracts from the story line. And, in the first sentence,it is unclear as to whether the light or the driveways are traveling to the end of the street. You will need a bit of help with punctuation in order to sort out that problem. Your writing will be much more receptive if you can learn to be sharply descriptive without being overly verbose and thesauric.